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yeah...solid colors do not look real, so I would mess around with gradients and such. But it seems pretty dang good IMO.
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Re: I'd like some helpful criticism
Looks very real to me. I think it looks amazing in a cartooning aspect. The proportions are very accurate. I'd just have to agree with the person up above somewhere who commented on the model appearance. If you were shooting for the 1993 look, you scored it on the dot!
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Re: I'd like some helpful criticism
You gotta either add the screen text of "Synch blah blah blah.."
Or.. Make the green light.. not green. Is it on, or is it off? |
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Re: I'd like some helpful criticism
Cool.....
Great Job. I really like the glare on the screen. Missing are sticky notes, fingerprints and passwords written on the frame |
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Re: I'd like some helpful criticism
That's really cool.
Just like everybody else said, I would add a light glare to the screen. |
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