UFH Comments, Suggestions, Etc.

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03-11-2003, 15:29

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UFH was a great idea, and I was thrilled to see it

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Originally posted by Raven_Writer
In my opinion, that is true. They are all "FIRST is great when I first entered [enter compitition name] [comp. type]".

I think this is a good idea. It has structure and it makes it more obvious to those who may not already know the UFH to learn about them.

Maybe you might want to change your paragraph structure a little bit. less "so and so did this" followed by the next paragraph saying "so and so did this" if possible maybe you want to say "this happened because of/with help from so and so" just a little sentence structure would make it more interesting to read.

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