|
|
|
![]() |
|
|||||||
|
||||||||
![]() |
| Thread Tools | Rate Thread | Display Modes |
|
#1
|
|||
|
|||
|
English Essay: FIRST Style!
On the first day of school, I was assigned an essay to write by the first day of the next week. The topic: Name one person or event that changed your life, and describe how this is so. Procrastinating as usual, I put it off to 11PM the night before it was due to start this baby. I knew I needed to do something different and interesting, something no one else in the class would possibly write about. So, I chose FIRST
I decided it would be good to stick to the topic and include Dean. Well, I finished a short while after and this is what came out... I'm definitely no good at writing, but I figured someone might be bored and get a kick out of it. Enjoy! Quote:
Last edited by Tom Bottiglieri : 06-09-2005 at 01:10. |
|
#2
|
|||
|
|||
|
Re: English Essay: FIRST Style!
nice essay! i wish i could have written about FIRST for English class..it only worked for photography assignments though. all wellz. but nice job again
![]() |
|
#3
|
|||||
|
|||||
|
Re: English Essay: FIRST Style!
I thought your essay was very well-written and flowed nicely. Looks like this was a turning point in your life (I can attest to the same). Anyway, nice job =)
|
|
#4
|
|||||
|
|||||
|
Re: English Essay: FIRST Style!
I like the flow a lot. If your teacher didn't know what FIRST was already, I'm sure he/she does now. Well done.
|
|
#5
|
|||
|
|||
|
Re: English Essay: FIRST Style!
I think I found an error. Oops.
Quote:
|
|
#6
|
|||||
|
|||||
|
Re: English Essay: FIRST Style!
Quote:
The rest of the mob went to Reliant, and found seats in their divisions which was kinda hard cause on Thursday the signs were not above the fields yet which was kind of annoying. Same deal in 2004 in Atlanta.. real annoying. Oh, and great job by the way.. Love the opening statement. I always have trouble with that. I always get red lined version back saying "make a stronger opening". Looks like you mastered that. ![]() |
|
#7
|
||||
|
||||
|
Re: English Essay: FIRST Style!
Quote:
There are a few spelling and grammar errors, but not enough to wreck the style and flow of your essay. It may be that writing does not come easily for you, or maybe procrastination IS your problem, but you are definitely able to communicate. ![]() |
![]() |
| Thread Tools | |
| Display Modes | Rate This Thread |
|
|
Similar Threads
|
||||
| Thread | Thread Starter | Forum | Replies | Last Post |
| HOPE FOR EDUCATION ESSAY CONTEST! | Rich Wong | General Forum | 0 | 18-10-2004 22:22 |
| Exhileration (Essay) | Jeremiah Johnson | Chit-Chat | 7 | 29-09-2004 09:00 |
| Suggestions now that we have thread style again | Ken Leung | CD Forum Support | 2 | 10-01-2004 01:23 |
| English? | Wetzel | Chit-Chat | 6 | 05-02-2003 08:04 |