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Re: 868 promotional intro nearing completion -- ideas to improve it?

I'm assuming the actual informational part for the sponsors as to what FIRST is, your team goals, etc. is coming up later in the video, so all seems well in that respect.
The only comments I have is the switch in the music seemed kinda abrupt, if you could soften that or transition it differently I think it would add to the piece. Also, the ball dumping sequence was a bit long, if you could find a shorter dump or speed up that footage somehow it might be a bit more appealing.
Other than that, absolutely fantastic work. Best promo intro I've seen in a long time.
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