pic: Team 3309 High School Advert

[itsjustjon]

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[SenorZ]

Definitely looks cool.
But, to me, it sounds like the students aren't the champions.

And there are no RoboDome references.

[DaveL]

Nice Job.

Things to check on.
- Gold color is hard to read. Verify color contrast by using a Color Contrast Checker, like Snook.ca
https://snook.ca/technical/colour_co...FF33,bg=333333

- The shadow under the robot. I would try a ground line or a more diffuse light source

- Make the robot image larger without crowding the page.

Dave

[nuclearnerd]

I really like it! You have a good eye for composition. The white space is very effective at concentrating your eye on the message.

[Liam Fay]

Originally Posted by DaveL

- Gold color is hard to read.

Oh boy do I know this struggle... I love our yellow but I basically can only write in black for print.

As far as thoughts:

- Try and fill out the top more. White space is nice, but it has to have balance.

- I can't tell from the resolution, but you may want to replace black text with dark gray.

- This may not be allowed by your branding, but I would see how the FB logo that you guys have would look instead of the numbers. 3309 looks a bit busy for this uber-simple (and beautiful) layout.