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By: itsjustjon
New: 16-10-2016 14:14
Updated: 16-10-2016 14:14
Views: 1194 times
This year, our team was able to get ad-space in our high-school's printed promotional magazine/packet which gets sent to most of the families who attend.
I decided to take some design tips from Apple to create this, and thought the CD community would like to check it out. Let me know what you think!
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17-10-2016 00:48
SenorZ
Re: pic: Team 3309 High School Advert
Definitely looks cool.
But, to me, it sounds like the students aren't the champions.
And there are no RoboDome references.
17-10-2016 02:11
DaveL
Re: pic: Team 3309 High School Advert
Nice Job.
Things to check on.
- Gold color is hard to read. Verify color contrast by using a Color Contrast Checker, like Snook.ca
https://snook.ca/technical/colour_co...FF33,bg=333333
- The shadow under the robot. I would try a ground line or a more diffuse light source
- Make the robot image larger without crowding the page.
Dave
17-10-2016 10:58
nuclearnerd
Re: pic: Team 3309 High School Advert
I really like it! You have a good eye for composition. The white space is very effective at concentrating your eye on the message.
17-10-2016 14:11
Liam Fay
Re: pic: Team 3309 High School Advert
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Originally Posted by DaveL
- Gold color is hard to read. |
As far as thoughts:
- Try and fill out the top more. White space is nice, but it has to have balance.
- I can't tell from the resolution, but you may want to replace black text with dark gray.
- This may not be allowed by your branding, but I would see how the FB logo that you guys have would look instead of the numbers. 3309 looks a bit busy for this uber-simple (and beautiful) layout.
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